Rough Cut Feedback

This is the feedback we recieved from our class. There are some positive and some negative comments, and we intend to use both to our advantage.

1.) Camerawork, good variety of shots, possibly more angles could be used and we will try to resolve this by shooting more angled shots.
2.) Mise-en-scene, heart in background subtle but good.
3.) Editing too much to look at.
4.) Split screen is good, fresh and exciting.
5.) Shots are held for slightly too long. To resolve this we will make our cuts faster more dynamic.
6.) The duck looks at the camera.
7.) Fits the fast paced song.

We are happy with our feedback, and will take on board the constructive critisism.

Also, we watched other people music video rough cuts. These are some of the good ideas we obtained through watching everyone elses videos:

1.) Setting the pace of the editing with the song is important.
2.) Making sure lipsyncing is perfect is vital.
3.) Judging the length of different shots means you know how visible different objects in shot are.